tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post2471504692117281264..comments2023-06-24T15:33:34.684+05:30Comments on Bits and Pieces: RaindropsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-21611186070867141962009-06-29T20:06:55.912+05:302009-06-29T20:06:55.912+05:30you have a point there...but then that makes him s...you have a point there...but then that makes him such a bitch ...besides it shud make her pissed not sad...but then not everyone is a sbellicose as me ;)Doodlequeenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14663971056448845788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-69600041647006358802009-06-25T11:17:43.636+05:302009-06-25T11:17:43.636+05:30No i want the guy to have ditched her for someone ...No i want the guy to have ditched her for someone else. The pain is much more.... her feeling for that love is intensified coz he's alive, makes it harder...if u get what i mean...<br />Rushil... thanks man... my assignments arent that tangled up :PRaynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07103804166226079981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-52266547077470870692009-06-25T11:13:56.854+05:302009-06-25T11:13:56.854+05:30kill the guy..its less depressing then...and more ...kill the guy..its less depressing then...and more sad..if u get wat i mean.and u ARE on my press team...:PAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18029058680609863603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-64597763066539229362009-06-25T10:10:10.785+05:302009-06-25T10:10:10.785+05:30wow!!!i nevewr knew u write!?!?!but then y do u ge...wow!!!i nevewr knew u write!?!?!but then y do u get tangled up in assignments??this is great!!rushilnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-81591222963118436862009-05-18T00:05:00.000+05:302009-05-18T00:05:00.000+05:30i just realized how screwed up my english was in t...i just realized how screwed up my english was in that post. SheeshSonianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-12279178574278305032009-05-17T22:51:00.000+05:302009-05-17T22:51:00.000+05:30IF THIS WAS A MOVIE, I'D SAY OSCAR NOW.
I can tot...IF THIS WAS A MOVIE, I'D SAY OSCAR NOW.<br /><br />I can totally see this in a movie, it's a very visual post. Makes you use your imagination. I really love it.<br /><br />Though I think that at some parts the writing is a little forced, but i don;t think it affects the visual appeal of the piece. <br /><br />Lovely Rayna.<br /><br />Sorry I took so long to do this. =)Sonianoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-52577373143177682072009-05-13T22:44:00.000+05:302009-05-13T22:44:00.000+05:30I agree with most of the other people who've comme...I agree with most of the other people who've commented. <br /><br />I could actually SEE it happening The rain, the girl, the dress, the moonlight, everything. Some amazing stuff!<br /><br />Even if you couldn't find the words, you still managed to put it forward pretty vividly, so that's pretty awesome =)Shalakahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04221269299984167695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-45305841437016010572009-05-12T23:54:00.000+05:302009-05-12T23:54:00.000+05:30I loved it :)The way you've written it - I could a...I loved it :)The way you've written it - I could actually feel what she was feeling. And Mathew's right!<br /><br />But it just freaks me out a bit that the word 'rain' makes you think of things like this. It's normally on the happier side :P<br /><br />And what's wrong with joining the press team? :P I think you should.Aparnanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-69360468749567003302009-05-10T00:04:00.000+05:302009-05-10T00:04:00.000+05:30rayna this is lik the bomb.. it was so sexc...
it...rayna this is lik the bomb.. it was so sexc... <br />it lik almost got tears in my eyes..<br />its so hot dude..<br />aaa..<br />n u say u dnt lik eng.. pah.. hahahahakhyatinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-6098611441059064482009-05-09T23:46:00.000+05:302009-05-09T23:46:00.000+05:30Resh... Well its an open scene man , u want the gu...Resh... Well its an open scene man , u want the guy to be dead he could be dead. But when i wrote it, i was thinking, the guy just left her... shes broken hearted, misses him.. he crushed her... <br /><br />It partially forced, mid way thru it sorta was...i couldnt find the words..Raynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07103804166226079981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-86209868549311833592009-05-09T23:40:00.000+05:302009-05-09T23:40:00.000+05:30hehe.. cleanly waxed legs?! no but thing is it was...hehe.. cleanly waxed legs?! no but thing is it was a very visual post.. like cause of your fine details i could realy picture the scene..<br />like it would be a perfect scene in a movie.. so im just checking.. but the guy is dead right?<br />in terms of like picturing this, twas very clear. but in terms of reading it.. i dunno i think it seemed forced? if that makes sense.. but all in all..i like :) im always into emo shitt :P anything that makes me crryy!! hehe<br />*resh*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00646187076329918356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-46417870542914489512009-05-09T23:19:00.000+05:302009-05-09T23:19:00.000+05:30Niyati... dude press team ? ur kidding i hope.
Sid...Niyati... dude press team ? ur kidding i hope.<br />Sidhuuu! thanks =)<br />Gauri... I love the rains too man, but this isnt about me, "fictional" story..<br />Tasneem !! thanks. I didnt the waxed legs was weird either. :PRaynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07103804166226079981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-85829820961687958662009-05-09T23:10:00.000+05:302009-05-09T23:10:00.000+05:30Rayna,i really liked it.
I thought the waxed leg p...Rayna,i really liked it.<br />I thought the waxed leg part was just fine.It seemed original to me because it's her thoughts.. and well girls do have weird thoughts:)Tasneemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12050753362844982817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-70564786524502388842009-05-09T20:06:00.000+05:302009-05-09T20:06:00.000+05:30heyyyyy....this post really touched my heart.........heyyyyy....this post really touched my heart......amasin stuff....keep ritin..god bless u...=)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01582704833872746498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-58419432844927106922009-05-09T18:25:00.000+05:302009-05-09T18:25:00.000+05:30Monsoons make me insanely happy and infectiously c...Monsoons make me insanely happy and infectiously cheerful. I would enjoy reading your stuff more if it had the same effect on you :) But congrats on the good writing.Gaurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02156516246059075826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-66447641099895928592009-05-09T12:31:00.000+05:302009-05-09T12:31:00.000+05:30i like....bt depressing..I WANT RAIN!!!!!! the hea...i like....bt depressing..I WANT RAIN!!!!!! the heat is pissing me off!!i agree with menaka ..cleanly waxed was jaraa too much info....<br />the eyeliner part was alright..it added to the despondency of the situation.<br />you are sooooo on my press team..whether u like it or not.. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18029058680609863603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-46079578577396764302009-05-09T12:02:00.000+05:302009-05-09T12:02:00.000+05:30rayna!
i loved it..i could actually imagine the s...rayna!<br /><br />i loved it..i could actually imagine the scene..<br />although the 'waxed legs' and 'eyeliner' thing kind of ruined the flow..<br />but chak go STUDY >.<<br /><br />all the best..waiting for ur next post :PDollynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-63137064248612402692009-05-09T02:03:00.000+05:302009-05-09T02:03:00.000+05:30Nishant... yeah man, I had trouble finding words i...Nishant... yeah man, I had trouble finding words in between, I could feel it but I had trouble finding the words.Raynahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07103804166226079981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-5420139815280781572009-05-09T02:00:00.000+05:302009-05-09T02:00:00.000+05:30Honest feedback ?
I think it didn't flow entirely...Honest feedback ?<br /><br />I think it didn't flow entirely when you wrote it. I think you had a moment when you had to stop and think about what you were to say next.<br /><br />You decide whether that is good or bad.Nishanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14616548164107910684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-89930664693050915122009-05-09T01:53:00.000+05:302009-05-09T01:53:00.000+05:30i loved it...
it made me feel tingly all over...
T...i loved it...<br />it made me feel tingly all over...<br />The way you have written it has a realy striking effect on the reader....<br />and if the reader is single, imagining like crazy...<br />loads of imagery...<br />i loved it...love ur imagination!!!!<br />sweetheart!!!! you rock!!!!<br />wahooooo<br />and i agree with the last comment.....you should try writing scripts.....<br />try out lyrics too!!!<br />love your work.....Gracenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-26360038648486782012009-05-09T01:51:00.000+05:302009-05-09T01:51:00.000+05:30Heyyyyy raynoo! awsome stuff, i could actually pic...Heyyyyy raynoo! awsome stuff, i could actually picture the scene, and ws waiting for the guy with tht girl. But the cleanly waxed parts lil scary:P.<br /><br />misss ya..<br /><br />miniMenakanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34996289.post-19692120156177220712009-05-09T01:37:00.000+05:302009-05-09T01:37:00.000+05:30Man, this post totally made my heart race. I perso...Man, this post totally made my heart race. I personally, could actually feel the sadness. You should totally write scripts. Beautiful piece. =)Mathewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06583709878420614706noreply@blogger.com