Surrounded by barren pain
Stinging tears
Crashed hopes
And emotional drain
Her eyes burn with fire
Free from happiness
Her heart heavily hollow
No one can fulfill her desire
The cruel comments come one after another
She wants to be lonely
Knowing she can’t give birth to a new life
Knowing she is leading the life of an infertile mother.
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Raynaaa! You updated:D!
I want to update my blog so bad, there are 5-6 incomplete drafts just... just lying there. But I can't seem to complete them :S..
Anyhooo, I like the last paragraph the most and the rhyming scheme is pretty cool : ABCA, lol.
Good one:)!
another great turnout....keep writing n u'll get better at poetry writing. :) keep it up girl.
woh!!! what made u choose this subject?
it's kinda sensitive, u know!
tell me what led to writing about this.......I thought the beginning was very good, but the ending was kinda cliche..........i have preferred some of your earlier writings....
Ms. Rayna Sanghvi, you are kindly requested to update your blog since you happen to be a brilliant writer.
Thank you.
i like!...touching
and different!! i like that! :)
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